Wednesday, November 5, 2008

FINAL CHAPTER 13

Karen Ruiz
CHAPTER 13
Are We Heading Home?
“Where are the rest; is there any one else on this island except you ?” the Officer asked Jack.
“Um, well, well NO! um no there isn’t” Jack responded back.
Then along came Ralph, screaming & running toward the Officer
“Finally we are rescued!” Ralph stopped right in front of the Officer ,
“You are here to take us back home right? Right? Right?!”
The officer turned and looked at Jack. Jack’s face turn into a hot pink redish color. The officer turned back to Ralph and said
“Yes I am here to take you back home, but before we go, is there anyone else included in this like is there anyone else on this island? Is there any dead bodies that you’ve seen?”
Both Jack & Ralph turned to look at each other. Then both looked at the officer and replied very nervously as a no. Jack said no there isn’t any dead bodies that I or Ralph have seen, “So it just um me and Ralph” Jack said. Ralph responded back
“Yes officer it’s just us me and Jack” He made a small smile. Then everyone stayed quiet no one said anything after a few seconds.
“Okay! Then; so officer are you taking us home on your ship?” asked Ralph.
The Navel Officer responded back as a yes.
“Are you boys sure that you both are the only boys on this island and there’s no one else here?”
Nervously Ralph and Jack responded. “Yes officer there is no one else here on this island, any more questions?!”
Navel Officer didn’t respond back, he looked around and saw a small piece of the conch left he walked toward it, grabbed it and picked it up & he stared at it for a while. Everything was back to silent. After staring at it for a while he left it back as it was and looked back to the boys and asked once again
“Boys, are you sure there is no one else on this island?”
Jack responded back
“No! Navel Officer there is no one on this ISLAND! So can we please go already? The Navel Officer rolled his eyes & Ralph took a seat on a heavy, burned piece of wood.
“Yes Navel Officer can we just go we told you #1: There’s no other people on this island, #2: There is no dead bodies #3 We are so sure there no one else living on this stranded island” said Jack.
The Navel Officer walked back to his place without saying anything he had this feeling Jack and Ralph were lying to him. Jack rolled his eyes at the Navel Officer. The Officer asked one more time
“Boys are you positive that that there is no one else here?!” Jack & Ralph said nervously “okay okay, yes but we didn’t do it.
Officer asked “Where was the last time you two saw the bodies”. Then Jack and Ralph stayed silent, Jack responded
“I don’t really remember” he put his both hands together and looked down at the ground.
“Can we leave now?” said Ralph. Then the officer took them to his ship and then they left. Jack & Ralph were surprised and really excited that they finally got rescued.
Something was wrong with the ship; it seems that something got stuck to the ship and then they heard something cracked. They got scared. The ship was acting crazy & then suddenly the ship broke from the back because apparently it wasn’t just a little rock it was a big one which made the boat get smaller which then jack accidentally fell out but lucky him he grabbed on to the boat.
“Ralph!!! HELP ME!” said Jack. Ralph tried to help him up but Jack was a little to heavy which made Jack fall of and since no one knew how to swim they both drowned. “Oh no” said the officer while grabbing on to the piece of the boat. “Im scared they all said”. The waves were going on fast and it was cold; The Officer finally fell and drowned too. Which now there all dead and no one survived.

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