Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Lord Of The Flies Post #1

Chapter#1
2=Jacks Entry
I'm the better leader(:

Here we are,and Im trying to find out where we are and all I can hear is really wierd noise that was really loud,probably people where there maybe not who know's.So we started from the mountain,and ofcourse I was at the front while the rest if the choir were behind me;so everyone didn't want to keep walking because they were tired they were probabably martyred by all that walking and really hot.All that ebullanience needed a rest but we kept walking.Next thing you know I found a kid and a ''fatty''right next to each other near by a beach; and so that kid was making that loud noise that sounded really weird and all he was doing is blowing on a shell that brought us over here.
So we talked to them and we found out that we were in an island and theres no posability we can be rescued because theres berly anything over here on this side. Me and the choir asked the names of each one of them and when we found out ''fatty'' was named Piggy all the choir started laughing and capering which Piggy didnt like at all; and also met Ralph.
So then we were deciding on who should be the leader either me or ''fatty'' because he was officious and smart and I was sort of smart but not that smart.But everyone voted that Ralph should be the leader.(bad thing they didnt voted for my choirs)So I gave him an incredulous look but instead he smiled at me which I didnt think he would do.So then everyone was trying to do something around if we probably found some help but apperantly we were the only ones.

1 comments:

Cristina Michel said...

I liked how you made yourself be Jack you did it really well because you made Jack look bad which he really is.I liked how you explain where they where like the places they went and how Jack was the leader of the choir.I liked how you use the vocabulary words in your journal entry and how you called Piggy fatty because that made Jack look bad or mean.