Sunday, September 14, 2008

Lord Of The Flies Post #2

Chapter#2
2-Jacks Entry
Theres Fire!!
Here I'm the leader so I get to decide the things that happen on this island.I'm the person in charge; I decide who talks and who doesn't.Anyways things are getting hard and Piggy is getting is annoying us & keeps telling us that we are not gonna be rescued because we are here on a island that no one knows that even crashed.But still I don't belive him.So we ended up with a good idea.& to me Piggy is such errant he's just not helping me out.Instead of Piggy saying that we're never gonna be rescued he needs to give officious because we really need it. After a while we decided that if we go up a mountain and we make a little fire we might get someones attention to come and rescue us.So we all cooraoperated to do something for example some came and pick up wood while a couple were taking care if the wood.When we were done with that we made a little fire but I dont think with that small fire we can capt someones attention so we needed a bigger fire so we got an okay fire going by pinching Piggy's specs. The kids were capering around happily and everyone had such an ebullience about them because of the huge fire. Then I just turn to Piggy to see what was his reaction & saw the martyred on his face.& again Piggy with his story about the kid that ended up dead.

1 comments:

Cristina Michel said...

I liked how you made yourself the character.I also liked how you spread the vocabulary and how you used it.I liked how you describe the places that they were.Also how you made Jack supposebly be the leader.